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Homework
By HannahandSophie
26 September 2008
I thought I should try and put something on this website so I hope this isn't bad for my first attempt. I personnally think it is quite good. Comments welcome.Smile


Got to do my homework,
Got to do it now.
Got to do my homework,
Oh look, a cow.

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so thats what goes on in there!
Written by Bookiegirl (15 comments posted) 26th September 2008
its nice 2 know what goes on in ur head! shouldnt u concentrate? which homework was it? nice rhyming btw! 
see ya round! 
 
steff 8)
Thanks.
Written by HannahandSophie (8 comments posted) 26th September 2008
Thanks Steff. It was just random but i really do need to get on with my homework! I actually thought i saw a cow but it was my dog. LOL! :grin

Written by Bookiegirl (15 comments posted) 26th September 2008
well, if she is still as big as b4, then i understand ur mistake! would like 2 see more of ur brilliant work! 
 
steff 8)
ok
Written by HannahandSophie (8 comments posted) 26th September 2008
alright, i will post somethin now. Obviously poetry.
I think you should
Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 26th September 2008
do your homework, I mean. 
 
I hope the ironic use of language in your reviews was intentional - GreatWriting, yet treating it like text! 
 
Thanks
Written by HannahandSophie (8 comments posted) 26th September 2008
I think that was a compliment. anyway. THANKYOU!
Welcome to GW!
Written by Jonaus (11 comments posted) 26th September 2008
Well, while nobody could ever accuse it of being the deepest piece of poetry on the site, I've always been a firm believer in the fact that everybody should have just a little bit of random nonsense in their life every day. 
 
In all seriousness, I congratulate you for at least just getting out there, socialising and contributing. Also, although the piece may have been brief, it did have a nice little rhythm to it, so there's another plus point. 
 
Nice try for a first attempt. :)
Hehe
Written by Bookwormandco. (39 comments posted) 5th October 2008
LOL 
 
I know the feeling exactly. 
 
You have a cow -dog?? 
 
WOW! 
 
Good writing, keep going! 
 
Lauren :grin

Written by HannahandSophie (8 comments posted) 5th October 2008
Thanks

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