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| Salty Terror | |
| By MessiahDave | ||||
| 22 January 2006 | ||||
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Leroy is a young boy with a mad hate-on for insects. Leroy
was an evil boy whose darkest impulse led And
wings surgic'ly detached from flies in ways most inhumane Of
a boy so young and yet so mired in small atrocity He heard a chirping noise that sent evil thoughts into his head "It must be a grasshopper!" The young boy did exclaim Leaping up from his sheets fully prepared to murder and to maim But the chirping was followed by a host of other sounds beneath the floorboards Of flies bizzing and locusts buzzing; an insectoid smorgasbord The sounds grew to a roar now as their speaker slithered into the room A vast and putrid creature clearly birthed from Satan's womb A
large grey slug with compound eyes did the creature most
resemble Beelzebub spoke out now in a voice forged in hell's ice Informing the young antagonist that his actions were quite un-nice And then the fly lord pondered what punishment could be best To
bestow upon the boy who he did so clearly detest And upon the boy salts most diabolic did he pour Leroy screamed out as the grains filled his mouth and eye Before they sucked the moisture from him and his lungs began to dry He began to shrivel now, quite quick, and his flesh let out a hiss As he left this mortal plane to dive into death's somber kiss But not with angels or with hell-fire did his post-mortem fate lie Instead he returned to our world as a pretty butterfly And it may intrigue you to know that his fate is nothing new Butterflies spawned of differing origins are actually quite few So the next time you complain about the fly in your chicken broth Always remember that you've never quite envied a moth
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