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| Summer Respite | |
| By sutpau | ||
| 28 September 2008 | ||
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Couples flee cities on hot summer days Seeking respite from heat’s oppression Escaping stifling city smells From tar and refuse And reflected heat on aged paintwork To laze in cool pastures, in lakes, or in pools or the sea Out into the country our couple speed As if to escape from cruel tyranny For respite For solace For freedom In hot sticky cars or by other means Until at last, bodies dampened and emotions heated They come upon a favoured place A country field with sweet promise Along one side A stand of tall poplars lined like sentinels Vertical branches barely moving On the faintest breath of a summer breeze Grass in the field browning cruelly under The merciless summer sun But still this familiar patch has its charms And hoped for respite from summer woes At the end of the field, in the middle almost Stands a weeping willow Spreading sad branches and spindly leaves Overhanging and shading a small island of field and stream Protecting our pair for a time from burning sun The stream meanders Impelled by summer rains, high on the hills beyond Gurgling as it tumbles and falls over the rocky floor Green mosses growing just above the water line Fed and dampened by the water below That carves out brown earthen banks where lovers can repose Freed from urban swelter and oppression The couple sitting side-by-side In willow’s shadow In their own natural world Being cooled together in shade and water Legs dangling into the coolness of the water So crystal clear and cool That oozes and slips by Deliciously bathing their feet on its way Cooling summer’s afflictions Offering respite Without dampening their summery love Somewhere near a birdsong chorus sounds Layering sound upon the gurgle from the stream A natural asymphony barely perceptible to lovers Who hear only their own hearts beat Time and sun relent For a time there is no time For a time there is no heat For a time our couple are captive in this place No heat to stress And warm loving hearts Beat as one Soon all this must end And to urban oppression return No more respite But at least love’s thirst is quenched for a time With a memory and fondness for that cool break Until the sweltering stifling city heat and fumes oppress again Driving plans for a new escape sometime soon
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