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I don't care.
By ReflectingGod
29 September 2008
I dunno.

I don't care anymore
Can't you see I'm trying to keep it together?
Why do you taunt me so?
I didn't do anything.

Liar, I never did hate you
Nor did I ever really, really like you
Isn't that fair?
A mutual agreement.

Take me apart with your words
Tell me  more stories and excuses
You think I cannot see the truth
But I see it clearly then you do

Leave me alone
I am trying to not care
But you keep crossing my path
Giving me pieces of my heart

I already have one death on my mind
I can't really carry the death of our relation-shit
Run along now, ta-ta!

I don't care anymore.



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Written by Fledermaus (3506 comments posted) 29th September 2008
I guess you meant: 
"You think I cannot see the truth 
But I see it MORE clearly then you do" ? 
 
This is about your stalker again? It's bad enough if that guy is ruining his own life, don't let him ruin yours as well. He should get some professional help, but considering your poems, it seems you certainly must talk to someone about it too. 
 
I don't know about this situation, but I do know that rejecting is an art of its own. Some girls can cause a guy to get hurt and frustrated, while others can make them walk away smiling.
A little...off
Written by ReflectingGod (30 comments posted) 29th September 2008
actually, no this is not about the stalker. 
I have already dealt with that and he's not bothering me anymore 
it's actually about a relationship I was in. 
 
But thanks for pointing out the error.

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