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By sutpau
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30 September 2008 |
Just another use of a word to inspire an intellectual/poetical challenge
Delicious,
Eating lovely iced confections
In our undressed state
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Written by Ranes (18 comments posted) 30th September 2008 | | Cute. Creates an interesting vision... |
Written by rushwilde (24 comments posted) 24th October 2008 | oo, I think it's a thing with your poetry, It seems I always find that the line that directly follows another isn't necessarily the only line that can follow it, like here i see:
Delicious,/lovely iced confections
Eating/In our undressed state
Delicious,/In our undressed state
i love it. |
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