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| Old Wine | |
| By sutpau | ||||
| 01 October 2008 | ||||
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Oh the frustration of being 'past it'! On a dusty shelf Alone a bottle of the finest red rests Soon to emerge from the longest rest Once its cork the waiter takes, and No shock to the red nectar makes First breath of natural air it takes What tragedy when first it breathes Sour on the nose, and Sour to the taste “Out with it, the wine has turned” Oh Bacchus great god of life Tragedy when fine red a vinegar makes Gone now that deep claret nectar caressing palette with silken flow No luscious ruby redness rewarding eyes with gentle glow No delicious aromas rewarding nose with subtle show All the senses offended now by what the bottle contains No bridge to joy it now retains No delight now remains Once so valued; now worth nought Where lies the boundary between ripe and not? Drinking well; still able to please No longer drinking, dispose at will How can we know? Peering into a uncorked bottle will never reveal No date can be declared Only by corking the bottle can we ever know Nose and sight and taste will reveal Try we must in order to know Wish this was true for old men too At least the old wine is tried before being dismissed Old men unwanted as too old Old wine is cherished until failing Old men are never uncorked To reveal the joy they can deliver “Out with him, the swine has turned”
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