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| Last Goodbye | |
| By ParadiseLost | ||||
| 02 October 2008 | ||||
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I have been working on this one for a while. It's not great. But I like it. Comments always welcomed. As the rain falls and patters on the ground. All I can hear is your heart beating to a passionate sound. We step closer and our hearts become entwined. More rhythmic and classical than Mozart and Beethoven combined. The rain suddenly stops as I begin to stare. My hand brushes through your smooth silk like hair. I want to lean in but I'm lost in your eyes. But when my lips find yours there is a surprise. The speed of my heart is now a sensation. The kiss is gentle with a new feeling of relaxation. Goodbyes I dread but this is outstanding. It's like we are connected have a understanding. We stop but a is not even spoken. As the word goodbye would leave us broken.
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