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By Toad
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04 October 2008 |
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My room is plain, maybe even dull
some girls might look for more
I am simple, but I am lively
and I don't think that you mind the decor
Because you laughed and laughed
when I bounded into the room next door
And stole you a pillow.
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 4th October 2008 | I like this. The sparse nature of the verse goes well with the subject of non-elaborate decor, and the friendly and witty nature of the writer comes through very well. It says a lot about the sleepover in a very few lines.
Hope she came back some other night. |
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