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On the Allotment in Late September
By Loz
08 October 2008
This is my first attempt at anything more serious than a limerick.

It was 'inspired' by an enjoyable Sunday spent working on my allotment.

Comments and advice very welcome.

Thanks, Loz

On the Allotment in Late September


Peaceful, bar a scattering of chattering birds,
I stand with summer at my back, penknife in hand
To slice the slack knots of twine neatly tied in spring,
Dropping curls of string onto leaves of yellow-green.
The unwieldy wheelbarrow awaits the remains
As I strip runner beans back to a bamboo bone.
Time unknown, so contentedly spent, my head bent
In concentration.  And yet, the spare autumn air
Nurses wisps of wistfulness: a season passing.
But here on the sun-bleached bench lie pods like knuckles,
Knobbly, and fat with beans mottled purple and black.
The promise of life curled inside each sturdy seed
Reminds me that nature’s cycle turns silently
As the jackdaws caw in quarrelsome harmony.

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Written by Phil (6997 comments posted) 9th October 2008
I'd love an allotment - just don't have the time. 
 
Thought this caught a moment or two pretty well. 
 
Phil

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