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Poetry
Breathe
By ReflectingGod
09 October 2008
Just keep breathing.

It wants to consume me
Drag me down into the depths
This depression

Breathe and I'll do the same

I feel unreal and cold
The winds of world bare down on me
This oppression

Breathe and count backwards

My final chance at redemption is here
I can see the face that moves me
This inspiration

Breathe and shout as loud as you can

I am waiting here
His smile is all I see and hear
This enlightenment

Breathe and close your eyes



 

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