Poetry
daughter
By Degari
12 December 2008

daughter


when you were born
my little daughter
it was cold and december
end of the season
snow had been dressing
the wavy skirts of the lousy city


shops were closing
and prices were getting higher


your mother was losing blood
and I was losing patience


smoking a lot
waiting a lot
counting a lot
how much left
how much gone


we cried a lot not because you came
but because you came late


now you are here with us
little princess
right here with us
in our arms


 

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Really liked it
Written by wendycat (2302 comments posted) 12th December 2008
This is really sweet, I think you put accross a really tense atmosphere, followed by this sense of relief. I can imagine you saying this to your daughter as you put them to bed. Lovely 
 
Wendy

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