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By meadowcroft1964
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30 December 2008 |
Living on a smallholding as I do you sometime get the unwanted guest or two and I am embarrassed to say I rather tackle a crocodile than a mouse
Micky that dam mouse the most terrible of his kind
Haunts both my conscious and unconscious mind
He scampers in my cavities destructive in his activities
Destroying my dreams when he starts to play
He stalks with claws uncurled
Striking fear when observed
Fur so dark and dense and with a tail so immense
Leaves me awake up and running for the door
I give up on any pretense to any defense
As he swiftly drives me from my bed
It's amazing how he evades the cat
He's extremely good at that
Poison he can suss out
No matter which is put out
Traps he leaves unsprung
The next solution is a gun
Though at present he left too have his fun
While sleep for me there's none
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Written by frenchy (19 comments posted) 5th March 2009 | Nothing special to get any credit from me but I am quite surpised that no-one has left a comment about Micky. As far as English and grammer goes I'm not even going there. All I can say is I just love the way it reads. Better than a lot i've read. I'm off to check out more of your work. Cheers, Colin
| Written by Mr_E_Writer (466 comments posted) 7th March 2009 | | Respect to Micky for holding back all that water! | Colin Written by meadowcroft1964 (244 comments posted) 7th March 2009 | Thanks for your kindness and I'd like you to know my grammar is improving slowly and I am continuing with my literacy class. E writer I really like your quirky sense of humour. Well it's a fact we all can't be prefect like you, though I'm informed God always loves a trier |
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