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Micky that dam mouse
By meadowcroft1964
30 December 2008


Living on a smallholding as I do you sometime get the unwanted guest or two and I am embarrassed to say I rather tackle a crocodile than a mouse 

Micky that dam mouse the most terrible of his kind

Haunts both my conscious and unconscious mind

He scampers in my cavities destructive in his activities

Destroying my dreams when he starts to play



He stalks with claws uncurled

Striking fear when observed

Fur so dark and dense and with a tail so immense

Leaves me awake up and running for the door

I give up on any pretense to any defense

As he swiftly drives me from my bed


It's amazing how he evades the cat

He's extremely good at that

Poison he can suss out

No matter which is put out

Traps he leaves unsprung
 
The next solution is a gun

Though at present he left too have his fun

While sleep for me there's none 


Reviews

Written by frenchy (19 comments posted) 5th March 2009
Nothing special to get any credit from me but I am quite surpised that no-one has left a comment about Micky. 
 
As far as English and grammer goes I'm not even going there. 
All I can say is I just love the way it reads. Better than a lot i've read. 
 
I'm off to check out more of your work. 
 
Cheers, Colin 

Written by Mr_E_Writer (466 comments posted) 7th March 2009
Respect to Micky for holding back all that water!
Colin
Written by meadowcroft1964 (244 comments posted) 7th March 2009
Thanks for your kindness and I'd like you to know my grammar is improving slowly and I am continuing with my literacy class.  
 
 
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I really like your quirky sense of humour. Well it's a fact we all can't be prefect like you, though I'm informed God always loves a trier

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