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| At The Cross | |
| By Pythagoras | ||||||||||||||
| 15 February 2006 | ||||||||||||||
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As I look up and see Him I am falling apart, My tears fall like hail stones He's holding my heart.
Bring Him down from the cross Please find some other way, Oh please save our Son, What's He done anyway?
He was always so easy Other children would cry, He was so good all the time Father, why must He die?
He's fading, oh Father, I can't watch Him, our Son, Oh why do you let it happen? You said He was the One.
You said He was the Messiah, Now you've let them kill The only one who could have saved us. How can this be your will?
Oh please bring Him down Father His death must be near It's nearly the end Oh He cries, can you hear?
Is this all for us sinners How could it be, That you'd let our Son die To save sinners like me?
Are we worth it, oh God? These Romans don't care They cast lots for His clothes That they'll never wear.
And all those to come Will they be concerned That our Son gave his life So they can have what they haven't earned?
Oh God, don't let it happen Bring Him back down to me, Let me have Him, my Son, I love Him, you see.
I'll take Him away, Give us a new start, Oh God, please let me have Him, You're breaking my Heart.
Oh God, I'm so selfish I know He must die He said it was written, Now I know why.
Oh it's all over now I can't see Him breathing, Oh, they're piercing his side My Heart has stopped beating.
As they bring down his body I fall to my knees With His head in my arms I cry out to you, please
Don't let this be a waste Let everyone see What our Son has given So they can be free.
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