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Barry Castor: Driving Instructor (prologue)
By pforrester
20 February 2006

I can't think of anything better to describe this as than a prologue. It is the opening to a piece of work that is currently 40,000 words in progress and will hopefully set me on my way to a life of fame and fortune (err, yeah.....).

Since learning to drive four years ago, I've found myself thinking about how driving instructors sit in the same seat every working day yet have such a variety of people sitting next them, and the relationships etc that form as a result of that. And then I added a fantasy element, because I don't know any better!


When time stopped, it came as quite a surprise to just about everyone. What was happening? Had the world stopped turning? Was the country going to remain in a permanent daytime? Were people going to have to live on planes that flew round the world constantly just to satisfy their need for a routine? Was money in bank accounts still earning interest?

One man not surprised - and therefore not contemplating such dilemmas - was Barry Castor. However, as he was in the process of teaching somebody how to drive he couldn't rest on his laurels. His pupil did find it something of a shock though, and the car would have run into the back of a bus had Barry not jumped on the dual controls.
     Sitting in the traffic jam, Barry reflected that he had been expecting it (the stoppage of time, that is, not nearly colliding with a bus). The clock in his car had failed to go round for... well, he didn't know how long because it had stopped telling the time. But it had stopped, and he'd spent the best part of his thirty years as a driving instructor telling people it was going to happen. Upon further reflection, Barry guessed this might have had something to do with him being unable to afford to live in his house anymore.
     "Time's stopped," said Laura, his confused student.
     "You know what you did wrong there, don't you?"
     "Time's stopped," she repeated, like she was beginning to accept it.
     "You almost hit a bus."
     Laura looked at him. "Time has stopped. TIME HAS STOPPED!"
     "So it has," said Barry, realising he couldn't ignore the fact any longer.
     "Just like you said it would."
     "Did I?" The glow of smugness was well concealed from public view.

Not that the public was looking. It would spoil nothing to say that there was a reasonable amount of panic going on. It would spoil even less to say that, naturally, time restarted itself fairly soon afterwards and the only ones who could offer any kind of explanation were those people for whom ‘apocalypse' was a word to be used on a daily basis.

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Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 20th February 2006
Am sure the story is going to be fine, but I don't think the title suits it. To me, it sounds like a cartoon character, someone straight from the pages of Viz. 
 
Then again, people in glass houses... etc.
I like the title
Written by johniebg (541 comments posted) 8th May 2006
although it makes me think of the title Mike Bassett england manager. If its not something thats sort of light hearted, then it wont work.

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