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By patterjack
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21 February 2006 |
Persistence
One touch of thought , dust trembles into beauty.
One soft caress and beauty turns to flame.
One tongue of flame and love is turned to ashes .
The bitter ash looks back to thought again. |
Written by neh205 (23 comments posted) 21st February 2006 | a simple poem but i like the way it links back to the beginning.
although im not sure the title reflects the poem? | persistance
Written by louise (4 comments posted) 21st February 2006 | | Four lines - and no more needed, for this sensitive, creative piece. |
Written by Vanderlay (8 comments posted) 24th February 2006 | | I like the imagery and the repetitions. |
Written by amboline (183 comments posted) 27th February 2006 | | Mmmm yes, lovely. Delicious music, and simple yet poignant choice of words. Good one! |
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