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A WORLD WITHOUT WAR
By brook_rivers
22 February 2006
Have had this one published!

A world without war is like a fish without sea,

But why did it have to happen to me

A world without war is like a sun without light,

But surely that's no reason to fight

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A world without war is like a laugh without sound,

Where people are lost but never found.

A world without war is like a tree without leaves,

A place where nobody grieves.

A world without war is a peaceful, happy place,

Uniting everyone in the human race.

A world without war is like a fish without sea,

Well that's what they tell me.

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Written by louise (4 comments posted) 22nd February 2006
can see why it's been published - it's depth of thought challenges emotions. Ex! 
 
I agree the site is v v slow, driving me a it barmy :zzz :zzz :roll I also wasn't allowed to reply to you in chat!
Thanks!
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 26th February 2006
Thank you for your comment louise. I will try and review some of yours in return!  
Are you joining the village of great writing soap? 
brook
Thanks!
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 26th February 2006
Thank you for your comment louise. I will try and review some of yours in return!  
Are you joining the village of great writing soap? 
brook

Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 27th February 2006
Your poem is absolutely amazing! I really really like it and I really mean that. If only I knew how to find more of your writing, I'd read it! There's nothing to fix about it so...GOOD JOB!!!! That's really all I can say...
Lovely Work
Written by aman_dove (1 comments posted) 22nd March 2006
A world without war is peaceful, sure we want peace.

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