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By blackrainbow
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28 February 2006 |
Haiku inspired by a girl sitting in front of me in class whose dyed hair was fading.
Black hair fading blonde, Worn-out smile on painted lips; Queen of Broken Hearts. |
BLINK AND.....
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 28th February 2006 | | Is that it? I've heard of economy of words but... |
Written by amboline (183 comments posted) 1st March 2006 | | That's the whole point of haiku. 3 lines, 5-7-5 syllables, nothing more. The trick is to say just enough that a huge space opens up for the reader to immerse themselves in the scene, and this one succeeds magnificently. |
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