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| By sasquatch | ||||||
| 03 March 2006 | ||||||
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this sketch is based on the scene from resevoir dogs when everyone has a gun pointed at each other and they all cop it. It seems that since then you cant turn around without some film trying to promote itself by ripping off this scene. there is a new one with Mike from Neighbours that does it again and that was my inspiration. so anyway; the scene is resovoir dogs, men in black suits lose their temper and the accussations of treachery fly. they all whip out their pistols and find themselves in the familiar stand-off. the first part of the gag is the amount of people involved in this standoff, perhaps 12 to 15, each having their own whoosing shot of them pulling their gun out. They are all standing their poised to shoot when suddenly another arm holding a gun comes out of nowhere from a strange angle, possibly from above. The guy closest eyes it nervously. 'Whos gun is that?' 'i dont know' 'its not mine' 'it aint fucking mine either' comes the chorus then another comes in from nowhere. again we only see the gun and the black clad arm but not who is holding it. 'who the fuck is that' with increasing panic 'what the fuck is going on' another gun comes in possibly from directly below this time. one guy shouts 'fuck this' and the shooting starts. we dont see it however and instead see the wall of the warehouse. we hear as many many bullets are fired. after a while we go back and they are all still there, no one apparently got hit. 'anyone hurt?' one of them asks a chorus of 'not me' comes back. 'ok...who wants a beer?' ventures another' a chorus of approval meets him and they all slope off. needs a better end?
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