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Every Writer's Prayer
By BrianRobertNeal
05 March 2006
With apologies to The Who

See me,

Feel me

Touch me

But most of all

Read Me.

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Written by funkylilith (2 comments posted) 5th March 2006
That should make Pete Townsend proud!!

Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 5th March 2006
Thanks for your time and comment, ironic or otherwise, you have read me and you have remembered Peter Townsend ; so we are both winners. 
 
Brian 
 
Hmm!!
Written by bloodange77 (38 comments posted) 26th March 2006
you know, Brian, you're are so right that is every writers prayer. I beleive that is what every writer prays too and you were the one who made me realize that with this peice. Thank you for the realization!  
 
 
With the love of someone very grateful 
bloodange77
Thanks
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 27th March 2006
For a review of a kind ones dreams of.  
 
Now I must go looking for a piece of your work to say a "proper" thanks. 
 
Brian
gay
Written by simon.ward72 (60 comments posted) 8th April 2006
it sounds like a U2 song. You know, the one from Batman. 
 
I understand what youre trying to do but it just come across a bit weird.  
 
the 'touch me' line sounds gay.
Not even "mildly cheerfull"
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 8th April 2006
I'm very pedestrian in my sexual proclivities. 
 
The Lyrics are largely from Tommy-the Rock Opera penned by thew who. 
 
The "Me" referred to, is that part of me that is revealed in my writing. 
 
Tucked away, I think somewhere on this Forum is a poem of poem mine called-Creative People. This is a more restrained approach to the subject of why we write. 
 
Brian. 
 
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