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| By patterjack | ||||||
| 06 March 2006 | ||||||
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The amniotic waters of the bay lap past the yachts , the cruisers at their moorings, and past my body , floating in the ripples. High above , a jet invades the north and leaves behind its long white plume to cleave the sky , with a silver arrowhead glinting in the sun. It disappears into the cloud , and now I watch the lovely long slow wheelings of three pelicans winding the world from left to right. Counter clockwise beneath , a solitary eagle scans the waves for prey , and a few unquiet gulls , resenting my passage past their roosts , flap up and around the boats. Only the cormorants are still , projecting their serpent necks , cautiously eyeing my passing.
Here in the water I am as light as all those uplifted birds , freed of earth’s weight.
I lie at the lowest point of the inverted cone of sight, I am too small to hold it to myself.
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