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Poetry
Rain
By Songster
06 April 2005

 

 

A little offering. 

 


RAIN

 

All day it has rained, we gaze out at the drenched

 

garden. Our day is spoiled, we are entrenched

 

in grief until a grey cloud, drifting, parts to show

 

sunlight refracting, arcing, a rainbow.

 

 

Songster

 

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Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 9th April 2005
Quite lovely. I like the way the rhyme sort of creeps up on you. Drenched and entrenched... 
 
It reads really well aloud. 
 
spidey 
Thanks Spidey,
Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 9th April 2005
Thanks Spidey, 
I wrote that one quite a while ago. It is ine of those things that, I think, lives in the computer. You put your hands on the keys and out it comes. Amazing.

Written by Betsie (30 comments posted) 10th April 2005
As resfreshing as its subject matter - well done. :)

Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 10th April 2005
Thanks Betsie.
agreement
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 12th June 2006
it does read really well out loud... 
 
Thanks for a very simple but very effective piece of writing

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