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For Dan
By an_aspiring_writer
17 March 2006
I have wrote this for my boyfreind as he has just lost his step-dad, do you think it is ok to give him?

Emotions are here, they are coming from you,

Let it all out, it’s the best thing to do.

 

When you are feeling like this, remember the truth,

I will always, always love you!

 

If I could take this pain I would,

If I could heal all your hurt, honest I would.

 

Living this life is quite hard at times,

But if you could be different, I don’t think you would.

 

You need to find happiness in things all around,

And I know when you look at me you feel proud.

I am the one that can brighten your day,

I am the one who loves you this way,

So live for the moment, live for the day,

And only remember I am all for you!

 

You are very special and I am nice too,

So together we can be quite delightful!

Make it your quest to make it with me

And together we can be for all eternity

 

If there is anything you need, anything you want

I am here for you, you only have to look.

 

Remember, remember I am your friend

And all I can do, I do it for you.

I love you, I love you the most

Do you believe you are part of my soul?


Loving you makes me whole,

And blessed be you

You deserve divine happiness.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

 


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Difficult question
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 17th March 2006
It's difficult to answer that question as only you know him and know how he is likely to react. But if you are asking is it a good poem,well is it designed for public consumption or just a personal note to your boyfriend.The honesty of the emotion shines out which is the main thing. If it's really how you feel give it to him, My only advice would be to leave out the last 3 lines and end on  
Do you believe you are part of my soul? 
More powerful Ithink --only my opinion feel free to ignore it and follow your heart

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