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Dizzy Genius Of Love
By thehurtline
11 August 2009
Hey, I'm back.  You guys have inspired me to take these poems on the road, so I'm gonna try out a few more.  Abstain from being a pretentious troller while commenting....

This one's         O F F   T H E   A L P H A B E T
                        
but strictly  ON THE MAP

He could de-feat a tax-ing-tie

but wouldmuchrather ,      ,    ,    NAP


The world does   spin
                        too 
                           fast   for  him

In ways he  m a k e s  i t  out . . .

                                              If I could change the speed of days!

                                             (I WOULD WITHOUT A DOUBT!!!)

Reviews

Written by Electrocupid (7 comments posted) 11th August 2009
Astounding - the title would be a fitting review, it holds it all in four words. 
 
Best example of imaginative presentation I've come across, pace all over the place like a romantic history. 
 
And fun, too =-)

Written by Val (308 comments posted) 11th August 2009
Great fun!  
Older you get - faster they go! 
Cheers

Written by Geoff (582 comments posted) 11th August 2009
Its different, certainly the format echoes the title but not clear I get the message very clearly, but as above, good fun!

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