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By thehurtline
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11 August 2009 |
Hey, I'm back. You guys have inspired me to take these poems on the road, so I'm gonna try out a few more. Abstain from being a pretentious troller while commenting....
This one's O F F T H E A L P H A B E T
but strictly ON THE MAP
He could de-feat a tax-ing-tie
but wouldmuchrather , , , NAP
The world does spin
too
fast for him
In ways he m a k e s i t out . . .
If I could change the speed of days!
(I WOULD WITHOUT A DOUBT!!!) |
Written by Electrocupid (7 comments posted) 11th August 2009 | Astounding - the title would be a fitting review, it holds it all in four words. Best example of imaginative presentation I've come across, pace all over the place like a romantic history. And fun, too =-) | Written by Val (308 comments posted) 11th August 2009 | Great fun! Older you get - faster they go! Cheers | Written by Geoff (582 comments posted) 11th August 2009 | | Its different, certainly the format echoes the title but not clear I get the message very clearly, but as above, good fun! |
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