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I have been writing poetry for some years, but have never had the courage to let anyone see any of it. But the time has come, and so here goes poem number one into the big wide world (or at least the world wide web). I have chosen this one to put up first as it's one of my more 'finished' pieces. I really hope some of you like it, and I would be very grateful for your comments (but please be gentle with me!). We swim in the water lost in blue surges We sit on the rocks to let sun warm cool skin You have gone under me as light behind shadow With bare breast and ripped dress part she-goddess part delirious as you sing your sweet music and worship the sea
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