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| Ch. #1 Jordan and the Coven Secrets | |
| By bloodange77 | ||||
| 19 March 2006 | ||||
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Hi this story is a lovely work of art but it is aversion of one of my other works. the other work was thrown away by my friends mother cause she is a mean lady. Anyway i had left it on her kitchen table, gone downstairs and when i came back up it was gone. Later i found out that she threw it to the kindergartners. oh well i'll be fine (although it was finished and ready to be published) The silver sliver of the moon was peaking through my window. I loved the moon it was a symbol of power and love to my clan. My clan was the Buviscki clan and they were a nasty bunch of people. Okay the word people would be a really big lie. We aren't people, we feast on human blood. I never understood why we had to until my mother told the most gruesome tale ever told to me in my memory. I will not recount it for your sake but I will tell my story. My story about the coven and Jordan. Jordan was my crush in nineth grade, the boy my two friends made me dance with. I had liked him forever but I never would have danced with him if they hadn't pulled us together. Actually he couldn't find me, but he was willing to dance with me, I was the one who was freaked out. Danica and Jassy decided we had to dance together. Little did they know that led to a whole relationship between me and him. He even smiled the whole time we danced. Well see before I had made my friend Sammantha dance with her crush. They were lightyears away it seemed. So I waltzed up to them and put his hands on her waist. The little bug wouldn't put his hands on her waist by himself so I did for him. Anyway Jordan said that he was sorry he so sweatty, I asked him how long he had known that I liked him. He told me that it had only been a couple of months. We dance like a foot apart from eachother. After it was over he thanked me for the dance and I thanked him back. Danica decided we looked cute together. So she went and asked him if he would out with me and he would have said if he wasn't going out will Mellina at the time. On the following Monday he came up to me and asked me out. It was cute but I had to find out the story behind all this. Mellina had broken up with him when she found out that he had danced with me and had liked it so much. We went to a movie that scared me so much that I had to scream and hide in his arms but it was all just acting. It was a vampire movie, by then I had known that I was a vampire althoiugh my parents really have tried to hide it from me. He hugged me to his chest and laughed a little. "Don't be so frightened, I wouldn't let any thing happen to you," he said. The tenderness in his voise mistified me so much that I all that I could say was," That's sweet of you." I layed my head back down on his chest and we went through the movie in a matter of time without me screaming again. My mind was made right then, I had to keep him not loose him. The coven wouldn't be able to stop me either. He dropped me off at my house and left the area. I watched him go and saw that he was smiling when he left. I ran up to my computer and kicked my stepbrother off it with one word," Sawashicka." He took one look at me and decided that I meant business. The word meant," Move it bfore I decapitate you, you load of cow dung." Okay so the only one trying to hide what I am from me was my mother. Noone esle knew and she planned to keep it that way. I got on and tried to find out how to e-mail the coven or research it but that proved useless. Which is where we are now. In my room looking out my window. I looked at the moon once more and decided that I had to talk with my mother about my situation. My mother would know how to research the coven she's appart of it. Wait. . . she's apart of it she can tell me alot then couldn't she? "Mother!" I shouted," Come here I have to talk to you!" "Patience sweetheart, I will be there in a moment," she called in vampiric language. "Mother, I'm just starting that school stop talking that language," I said as she walked into the room. "You need all the practice you can get though, alright I'll talk in english. What is it darling?" she compramised. "Mum I need to know about the coven. The love part of it," I said. "Oh, well what about it? You know most of it. You know you can't give birth to a human child only a vampire child. You know that if you marry a human you'll have to fake your own death before he gets old enough to tell that you aren't human. This is why we usually marry other vampires. You know that it forebidden when you are your age to go out with a human and have a serious relationship with him unless you want to turn him without him knowing," she said. ( Hey sorry I couldn't go any further with this chapter but my half-brother wants a turn on the net. See you all later, and please post what you think so far. Tell me if you think it doesn't have enough details. I want your opinion even if it is meaner than anything I've ever been told. Thanx for the chance to write it is my passion.)
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