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| Ch. #1 Jordan and the Coven Secrets (2) | |
| By bloodange77 | ||||||||
| 19 March 2006 | ||||||||
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Heh, heh, hi I'm back. Sorry I had to go then in the middle of a chapter like that. .It's not my fault please don't kill me. . Thanx for being patient though. Her words were no shock to me yet I could tell that I would end up breaking a few rules anyway. I knew from the way I had raised my eyebrow that I had given my thoughts away too. She knew what I was thinking and she glared at me and shook her head. "Don't do it, you can't get away from us, we are your coven. I am your mother you wouldn't go against me would you? No, you wouldn't dare do it would you, no you're too chicken to do it," she argued with me without me saying a word. "Stop telling me what I will and will not do you may be my mother but you do not know me that well dang you!" I yelled at her in vampiric language. "Don't yell at me young lady I am your mother. You will not defy me. If you do I shall. . . I'll have him killed. I know about your little date with the little human boy. What was his name? Oh yeah, Jordan," she began to laugh unpleasantly like a hyena having a laughing attack during a chearleader slip-a-thon. "You know what mother? I hate you and your little laugh. It sickens me that you would be so cruel to me, your own daughter. Do you really hate me that much. So much that you would kill another to make me unhappy?" I growled invampiric language. "They said it's either that or I kill you. I don't really feel like killing my only daughter. So as to your question, yes I would kill another but not to make you unhappy but to keep you alive. Now stop thinking about disobeying the coven!" She said not laughing anyore. "GO AWAY CAVARADIN!!!!!!" I yelled in english. Cavaradin meant you stupid cow of a mother in vampiric language. She looked surprised that I would even say that to her. Somehow she understood that she deserved it and walked out of my room. I couldn't let them kill Jordan. He didn't deserve to die on my account. I walked down the hall and out the front door into the rain. The moon had disappeared behind the clouds. I had to warn him somehow that my clan here in Paris wad looking to kill him because of me. If he dies than I will hold myself responsible. I'm only fifteen and I haven't killed anyone. My teeth are growing now for the first time in my short life and I am now becoming that which I hunt in all video games. A monster, I am to be monster. I didn't want it to happen but I know it will. There is no way to hide from myself now. It's inside me yet it has not gained controll yet. Its power is growing though. It shall take over me if I don't feed it soon. It will be stronger than me soon. Yes, I had to warn him! I didn't want him to die. He is too young to die, but so am I, great another great decision to make. I began to run with all my might. I may be a vampire but my powers had not kicked in yet so I ran quite slowly. My speed was not fast enough. I tripped and flew a few feet forward then touched the ground again. I have to keep running, I can't give up. He has to live, he just has to. That or I should just die for him. I either run and warn him or I die for him. I got up off the ground and began to run again. I didn't yet realize that I was bleeding so when a swarm of vampires from my clan surrounded me I was taken quite by surprise. They then smelled the vampire in my blood and one young male stepped from the flock and picked me up. The others departed and he looked at me. "Where do you live girl, I need to take you to your mother or your father. Where do you live?" he seemed to be rambling on now. "Who are you and what do you want from me?" I asked. "I am Nickoles but you may call me Nicka," he said. "That doesn't explain much, but what do you want from me?" I inquired. "I want to take you home with me but first I need to know your mother and where you live first," he said. "I live. . ." then I stopped," I don't have to tell you a dang thing." That's about when we recognized eachother. He gasped and then started to flit. I had a feeling he already knew where I lived. I tried to get away from him. I glared at him and he smiled and laughed a little. "What's so funny?" I asked. "Seeing you out at night and the fact that you're a vampire too, Elizabeth," he said. (Hope you liked this chapter.)
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