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| By bloodange77 | ||||||||
| 19 March 2006 | ||||||||
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Poems don't have to rhym so it doesn't and if you tell me it was bad I don't really care much cause I had fun with it. You're supposed to love doing what you do. I love to write. >My birthday was a hit. >Suezy got her hair, >Meaning that she got another wig cause, Jake cut it all off while she slept. >I switched Sandy's vanilla pudding with, doggy pudding. >She yanked Jake's ear for it, I don't blame her. >Jackie kick Sandy soundly, She was going out with Jake. >Mindy jabbed Jackie in the eyes, No one really knows why. >I liked my birthday cause I, Was the only one who didn't get hit. ¥ 18-03-2006 ¥ 
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but I agree with BBS. You can certainly write and you enjoy it so have a little more faith in yourself!! Great, fun read - loved it! Just one small, tiny thing - the 'j' of 'jackie' should be capitaized in line 11...
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