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Two sides of a conversation |
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By patterjack
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23 March 2006 |
Two sides of a conversation
I say it's a meagre , thin love this , unwholesome.
What else could a good Romantic poet say
who'd fling his heart a wounded bird to make it fly
rather than let it , crippled , merely flutter
away?
No courage here; not even the plain straightforward statement.
I know all the facts of it - but then who else would care ?
I'd tell you , and tell you gladly, but not even you,
the all-too-unwitting object , would know of any way
to share.
I'd like to take all the words I know and speed
them far to the curving rim of clear dark space
and blazon them there in one gigantic creed
but all the resultant consequence I could not
face.
To hell with it then for lacking the simple courage
to tell of the dreams I have dreamed , I'll cut them dead
and trample them deep in every day's pollution.
This I have thought and thought and thought of as the only
solution.
............ and a repetition
A lover may fling his heart at a golden bird
but what would a good romantic critic say
if then he let it flutter with crippled wings
away...... |
layercake........ Written by Bagheera (685 comments posted) 23rd March 2006 | I had to read this slowly several times, and each time I came up with a (slightly) different overall train of thought. It made me realise that poetry is not always what it seems: you can "cut through it" (hence the 'layercake' analogy, 'cos I'm not good at expressing myself in poetic terms! ) .... ..... you can, as I started to say, cut through it and fins different LEVELS of meaning. What made the biggest impact on me was the slight but significant variation in the almost-repeated stanza at the end. Lots to think about here, I'll no doubt be back to it several times to squeeze a bit more from it. Very enjoyable! |
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