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Your feelings - why hide?
By Nance
26 March 2006
I wrote it when my grandfather passed away.

Do not hide your feelings. For you they are so ridiculous. But, trust, they are not in the least. Something is dieing now in your soul, and you can’t save it with all your desire. Why are you looking forward to a better day? This one had been created for you – even if it is so hard to know.
Hey, do not close your eyes. Tears are natural. Especially in the second, when there is nothing more in your trembling heart. Face the truth – you simply don’t want to loose them. Something growing in you now is sorry for the doubts which do not let you forgive yourself.
The hardest minutes ever pass. Anyway. It’s impossible to breathe easily, when you’re absolutely beaten. What for are you pretending? The invisible hand stole every right to choose, but the slightest breeze has remained for you. For your untold words rending what had left, for your nonexistent little town, for your single verity out of which you are never able to calm.

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Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 13th April 2006
The value of what you have lost can only balance what you gained when they came into your life. What you are left with is everything that came in between. You must not let grief overstate its case. 
 
Brian.

Written by Nance (86 comments posted) 13th April 2006
And I don't. Okay, maybe only in the very beginning. 'cos you just can't CONTROL your feelings. But I got something, and I learned something. Something which is right important. which makes me keep moving forward. And this is God's merit I guess. 
You're not indifferent so I'm telling you a huge "thanks".

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