Great Writing - Home > Poetry > Pygmalion reflects
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1926 guests online and 7 members online
Poetry
Pygmalion reflects
By patterjack
27 March 2006
Pygmalion Reflects

Now that there can be no return,
now that the oft-repeating telephone has told
that you are gone , are gone ,
there yet must be some way that I can mould
a new love to replace the older one.
For, I remember , you were my creation.
Yes , you were mine , for from the golden flame
of a steady candle I fashioned flesh,
modelled it with love till it reached perfection
in those your lips , warm-red and satin-smooth.
And now I am caught again in this old mesh;
I can refashion love, give it another name
or call it Galatea , only to discover
that you and you alone are my new lover.

Reviews

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item