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| Ummm not sure what to call this | |
| By ericthered | ||||
| 27 March 2006 | ||||
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It's random and pointlss please be kind A long journey down a short road. Inadequacies beat like a drum, boom boom, boom boom Smoke it , Snort it, Drink it, and Lose it Escape/ red rivulets down my arms. And psycho-cathartic, moments with raven haired, angel-headed hipsters. The room spins in a spiral, Downwards I fall…. Yet still you claw me back. Like a bitter sweet pill warping my senses and making me, Making me cry molten tears of bitterness. And yet afterwards I thank you and say goodbye once more.
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