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| She won't see. | |
| By hafutota | ||||||||
| 08 April 2006 | ||||||||
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i wrote this more as a song, though, during a train trip home, but since most of my friends already regard it as poetry i thought i'd post it here. thanks in advance for reading and reviewing. i look forward to improve my poetry, so drop in any comments. I sit around the usual place, At the corner in the train, Wishing that these things would be, A little more of what i dream I just want to see her smile, Nothing more is worth that while, Hug her when she's sad and down, And joking when i see her frown but Why won't she see..... Why won't she notice me.... Why won't she smile.... Nothing else is worth that while. Take me away, Take me away from my mistakes. All i wish are things would be, A little more of what i dream but Why won't she see..... Why won't she see me..... All i want is just to say, "I miss you every single day." Hold her hand when we are close, Cover her when she is cold. Help her out with college work, Laugh when she says i'm a jerk, Stroke her hair when she's asleep, Hold her gently as we kiss But Why won't she see.... Why won't she look at me... Why won't she smile... When i'm close around... Take me away, Take me away from my mistakes. i know that we could never be, At least, God, please notice me but Why won't she see.... Why won't she see me... Day by day, I look your way And i hope That someday Just someday You would say "heys" and smile....at me And here i'm now, off this train, Walking down this solemn rain Wishing that these things would be A little more of what i dream but She won't see.... She won't notice me She won't see And she will....oh she will...she will never... love me.... Take me away, Take me away from my mistakes. Hug me when i'm sad and down Kiss me when i wear a frown But She won't see..... She won't see me..... Cos she can't see.... Someone, oh someone Like me......
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