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Fidget the Midget
By umbugjug
18 April 2006
this is the whole version, the first bits of which are already on here. finally i have worked out what exactly was making fidget wriggle and squirm. it was obvious really...



Fidget the midget

just couldn’t sit still

He started on Monday

            And he’s fidgeting still

 
He’d fidget in lessons.

He’d fidget at tea.

He’d even been fidgeting

at Grandmother Bee’s.

 
His mother and father

            Were simply perplexed.

They really were troubled -

            Where would he start next?

 
They sat him on cushions,

            He’d fidget a lot.

They tried him with ice-cream –

            He’d just fidget with spots.

 
 
Fidget the midget

just couldn’t sit still

He was wriggling Tuesday

            And he’s wriggling still

 
He sat on a daisy

            But wriggled right off.

He wriggled out of the garden

            At Old Uncle Moth’s

 
Doctor McWicky

            - A fly of renown -

Was called to come quickly,

            From the far side of town

 
“Oh dear” he exploded,

            with a splutter and spit.

“I really don’t like this.

            “Oh no, not a bit.”

           

       
Fidget the midget

just couldn’t sit still.

He was jiggling Wednesday,

            And he’s jiggling still

 
Down at the lily pond,        

            He jiggled about.

And as soon as he dived in

            He jiggled right out.

 
Ointments and potions

            Were tried – they all failed.

And a hot bath with salt in

Made him jiggle and wail.

           

“Call for the A-Team

            They’ll fix him I bet,”

Said Old Uncle Moth.

            “Those Ants are the best”

 
 
Fidget the midget

just couldn’t sit still

He was waggling Thursday

            And he’s waggling still

 

The A-Team arrived,

            Said Hi to Old Moth,

Then sat on poor Fidget –

            Who just shruggeled them off.

 
The boss Ant looked sadly

            At the fidgetting kid.

“We should make him a bug-pen!“

            So that’s what they did.

 
 
Fidget the midget

just couldn’t sit still

He was squirming on Friday

            And he’s squirming still

 
The A-Team got started

            And soon it was built -

A cage for poor Fidget,

            Stood on rickety stilts

           

Poor Fidget looked mournful.

            “But mummy,” he said.

“How will you read me stories

            Before I go to bed?”

 
He tried it that night though,

            Asleep under stars.

In his dreams he went slinking,

Right out through the bars

 
Fidget the midget

just couldn’t sit still

He zig-zagged on Saturday

            And he’s zig-zagging still

 
His mother said “That’s it.

            Demolish, destroy!

“This is no kind of bedroom

            For my wriggling boy.”

 
So she sat her poor Fidget

            Right down on her knee

And said “I’ll have a think dear”

            “Now, you eat your tea”

 
It was Fidget’s best favourite

             Pips, nuts and honey.

He just jiggled the plateful

            All over his mummy          


 
Fidget the midget

            Was lying still in his bed,

Still, calm and restful,

            While his pleased mother read.            

 
Why was he tranquil?

            What stopped his worm dance?

How did it happen,

            This serene circumstance?

 
Well…

                       

That morning his mother

            Had given a hug

“Alas my poor Fidget

            You sweet jumping bug”

 
“Oh, mummy” said Fidget

            “Please help me, please”

Then popped out of her arms

            As his poor mother squeezed.

 
She told him she would help

            If she possibly could

But who else was left

            In their part of the wood?                       

                       

They’d asked Doc McWicky

            Who was taken aback.

And we all know he’s clever

            And no kind of quack.

 
So they called in the A-Team

            - The finest of ants.

They sat on poor Fidget

            Who wriggled out of his pants.

 
Then a cage was constructed

            For the shruggling bug

But that could not keep him 

As he squiggled and shrugged.

 
His Mummy considered

            The strange circumstance.

What was it made Fidget

            Wiggle, waggle and dance?

 
But then it just struck her.

            “How could I not see?”

She smiled at poor Fidget.

            And said, “Biscuits for tea?”

 
He said “Please” to his Mummy,

            “That would be great.”

So she went to the cupboard,

            And filled up his plate.

           

He gnashed chomped and gobbled,

“Yum, yum in my tum.”

But crumbs flew all over -

            Most went under his bum.

 
That was the solution -

            A crumby behind.

“Thank goodness,” said Mummy

            “I’ve just been quite blind.”

 
So from then after eating

            Some biscuits for tea

Poor Fidget the Midget

            Is vaccumed all clean

       

Reviews
Fun
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 18th April 2006
A great poem for kids with a fun ending and the word "bum" in it which they'll love. I just hope they have a longer attention span than me,cos I struggled a bit towards the end.
thanks
Written by umbugjug (46 comments posted) 19th April 2006
i think it works well for kids, but i tend to agree with you about it being a bit long.
imaginative
Written by Snow-Bear (9 comments posted) 22nd April 2006
HAA HAA it's funny, I like it, good sense of humor and it does for kids. the only thing is that it is abit long. another than that is is imaginative. 
:)

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