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Heavenly Body-enter Mea Morphic.
By BrianRobertNeal
20 April 2006
BBS and I are locked in a creative struggle which can only result in one winner-hopefully the pair of us.

The piece is therefore rushed and ill considered. Still time was of the essence.

I didn't mean to kill BRN, when I accidentally entered him. But I so wanted a body. I'm much more sophisticated than when you first met me on SciFi/Fantasy.  I've reconstituted as much of him as I could muster. We're on our way to eat with a female human.

I'm much troubled because BRN seems to have felt that the female would destroy him. He wrote about her. He would die in a blinding flash. (When I said that I giggled a little, how odd.)

I wonder why he was going, even though he knew she was his nemesis but he seems to be driven by some seemingly holy mission, he was going "to have his end away."

"Away" is a football term, meaning not at home. So he wanted to die but not at home. How strange?

Oh well, she is in for a shock. I unfortunately carry a very large static charge and have inadvertantly ended several people and a dog.

I must keep touching things that are metal for that seems to keep the level of electricity down.

Well, I'm here, at her door, I'll press the button that makes people come-(Why when I said that, did I once again giggle? There's lots I dont understand about humans.)

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 20th April 2006
Bloody hell.Brian I'm a bit out of my depth with sci-fi. ok give me a day or so.I'll watch a few episodes of Dr Who to get jargon before I try to reply; otherwise I'll have to leave it to you. 
Mea Morphic, eh more like Mea culpa. I'll have to read it again. 
cheers 
Mrs B

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