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| Heavenly Body,----the aftermath | |
| By Bottleblondesurfer | ||||
| 21 April 2006 | ||||
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This isn't a stand alone piece it follows on From Brians Mea Morphic sketch and the other Heavenly Body ones. I couldn't do sci-fi if you put a ray gun to my head. so this is after the encounter with Mea Morphic. I'ts a bit disjointed but I wanted to get something up to keep the momentum. If any sci-fi types want do it justice,feel free. Ok so where was I?… no I meant in the story. I know where I am. Look I’m not a loony. I’m as sane as the next one . The trouble is last night he was the next one. He’s the loony not me, he’s the one should be in a straight jacket….. I’ve told you about the knives I like cooking….I’ll bet Delia smith has more than 20…No it wasn’t an altar in the kitchen ,granted it does look like one but marble is back in fashion now. They should be out after him, yes him.. bloody Rainman’s thicker cousin that’s who. Said his name was Brian, but it could have been anything. Look if they found Rohipnol in the Chianti he put it there, bloody weirdo. Course he exists who do you think trashed the place? But I didn’t t let him in , he just made the door open and walks in like he’s only just learned how. I swear he didn’t recognise me Whatever I said he just repeated like a kid, drove me mad …. you know all this from the police report. I hate shrinks. I had enough of you lot when I was a kid. No I can’t account for all the bloodstained clothing in the washer..….Yes I did stab him but it was in self defence ….and get this, he didn’t bleed he lit up like bloody Christmas tree…fused every light in the whole block. I swear he just stands there….glowing. Then he starts running around saying he’s so hot and stuff starts flying around. I’m lying on the floor, if it wasn’t for the rubber sheet I’d have been a goner ….no I don’t think it’s kinky Then he just says he is going and hopes to see me again. I’ve no idea who called the police…. I tell you I’m scared, it was seriously weird. How should I know where he went……Bloody Hell if you want to know why not ask him he’s just walked in the door.
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