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Ghost still be survive
By fengchi
22 April 2006
a poetry from TAIWAN

God and Ghost

It was a world which including ghost and it was a peaceful world under the God

as there was a ghost in all our mind,we feel that feelings of all humanbeings in taiwan will die.

Did have died the God?desires and illusions always be our side as a territible ghost

we ought to love our earth and our country

what should we own?we should be a rich man.shall we?

the world of ghost ought to be impressed by our strong mind


God still be our mind,it means that Ghost seem to die.

the world always be not belong Ghost.
ghost survive is for their next living....but there already be no chance of them.

because of freedom,equality,and God.

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 22nd April 2006
I'm guessing that the word ghost could could translate as spirit which would explain things better for me>However I may be wrong, It is a brave attempt, you are trying to express complex emotions in language which is not your own

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