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By fengchi
22 April 2006
poetry from TAIWAN


who!? Do not remind me who i am

who!? Do not remind me who i am

i dreamed myself,as i was alone,what's about you?

for long time ago,you had been still on my pain mind,talking about love,right?

it was not concern about you,but it was about how  i love you ...

who did have been in my love?what is love?was love about sex?

when i kiss your lips ,you are really a girl.

yes,woman as a flower,people say that woman is a cat alike.

it is boring that there were a lot of poems to call for that love is the only one.

behind love,nothing?

sex?

we ought to behind the feelings about sex and love

yes...behind woman,you can see what love is


behind love,you can understand what woman is!!

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An odd poem
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 22nd April 2006
Without any disrespect I had this feeling that it could have been written by one of my characters-Mea Morphic. 
 
Is the awkward use of language intentional, an attempt to create a particular effect or is it a sort of Patois. 
 
For example-"woman is a cat alike" or "we ought to behind the feelings about sex and love" 
 
Nonetheless a thought provoking read, 
 
Brian. 

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