A doctor /lecturer friend had a skeleton upon which she demonstrated to her classes.
She saw me looking at it one day and remarked to me She must have been a dainty lady
That bald but sympathetic statement has remained with me for years
Anatomy Class Skeleton
I have no doubt that once you were much admired.
A truly dainty lady you must have been ;
these are no peasant’s bones; but now
imagination quails before the task
of clothing this in flesh.
Some few dry facts are there:
female, Caucasian ;
nationality :probably French.
The rest is mostly insignificant
(for example, six teeth lost from the lower mandible,
two before death)
But what you are now is nothing more
than a student exercise in reconstruction.
What once was round and warm now shows
only cold and angled planes of light,
the quintessential pattern of abstraction
From this point , speculation .
Your preferences
are not to be consulted in the matter.
I can only wonder , did you feel
death’s fingers probe into the shrinking flesh ?
Did you die fevered , chilled , smiling or in tears?
Did you die shriven ?
And when they buried you with bell and benediction
did they imagine you would come to this ?
Enough .
I regret that I can offer you no more
than this within me - a memento mori.
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Hi PJ Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 22nd April 2006 |
I'm having a good morning on GW. I've read a number of pieces of work and what is refreshing is the breadth of approaches and styles. This piece set off a range of thoughts, all morbid. Brian.
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Liked it Written by steve666 (50 comments posted) 22nd April 2006 |
You hit the right chord with me Patterjack - I'm the kind of person who looks at old photographs and tries to imagine the life the person is / was / living. For me, the ending up of the skeleton in a class of knowledge hungry people is a positive. Not the cold and dark ground, all alone and forgotten. No - the endless possibilities on a life lived. Anyhows, i really enjoyed the piece, but would have written it to be a little more upbeat myself! Ah, well. |
The bones of it Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3329 comments posted) 22nd April 2006 |
it's funny what can spark off the creative process. I wouldn't have thought a skeleton would do that but then I,m not a poet. It's one of those pieces that you read and later it comes back to haunt you which I suppose it the mark of really good work. Though I don't know why you regret it's all you can offer it's more than most skeletons get. I remember another poem from you about a Roman soldier, youseem to have a reverence for the lives of those who play the minor parts in life. |
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