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Anatomy class skeleton
By patterjack
22 April 2006
A doctor /lecturer friend had a skeleton upon which she demonstrated to her classes. She saw me looking at it one day and remarked to me She must have been a dainty lady That bald but sympathetic statement has remained with me for years

Anatomy Class Skeleton

I have no doubt that once you were much admired.

A truly dainty lady you must have been ;
these are no peasant’s bones; but now
imagination quails before the task
of clothing this in flesh.

Some few dry facts are there:
female, Caucasian ;
nationality :probably French.
The rest is mostly insignificant
(for example, six teeth lost from the lower mandible,
two before death)

But what you are now is nothing more
than a student exercise in reconstruction.
What once was round and warm now shows
only cold and angled planes of light,
the quintessential pattern of abstraction

From this point , speculation .

Your preferences
are not to be consulted in the matter.

I can only wonder , did you feel
death’s fingers probe into the shrinking flesh ?
Did you die fevered , chilled , smiling or in tears?
Did you die shriven ?
And when they buried you with bell and benediction
did they imagine you would come to this ?

Enough .
I regret that I can offer you no more
than this within me - a memento mori.

Reviews
Hi PJ
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 22nd April 2006
I'm having a good morning on GW. I've read a number of pieces of work and what is refreshing is the breadth of approaches and styles. 
 
This piece set off a range of thoughts, all morbid. 
 
Brian. 
 
Liked it
Written by steve666 (50 comments posted) 22nd April 2006
You hit the right chord with me Patterjack - I'm the kind of person who looks at old photographs and tries to imagine the life the person is / was / living. 
For me, the ending up of the skeleton in a class of knowledge hungry people is a positive. Not the cold and dark ground, all alone and forgotten. No - the endless possibilities on a life lived. 
Anyhows, i really enjoyed the piece, but would have written it to be a little more upbeat myself! Ah, well. :)
The bones of it
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3329 comments posted) 22nd April 2006
it's funny what can spark off the creative process. I wouldn't have thought a skeleton would do that but then I,m not a poet. It's one of those pieces that you read and later it comes back to haunt you which I suppose it the mark of really good work.  
Though I don't know why you regret it's all you can offer it's more than most skeletons get. 
I remember another poem from you about a Roman soldier, youseem to have a reverence for the lives of those who play the minor parts in life.

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