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Sunday Treat
By spiderbaby49
13 April 2005

Just wrote this for a challenge on another site


Rainy afternoon
at your place.
Your face,
creased in smiles.
"What gives, you loon?
What joke
has choked you,
made you grin?
"Stay right there,"
you said,
"on the bed,
won't be long."
 
Waited, bare,
in the sack
You came back.
"Close your eyes."
Cold ice cream
on my skin
made me scream
in surprise.
 
"It's Sunday,
my ice cream
sundae girl,
raspberry swirl."
Tricky,
that slippy, sticky,
love dessert
but delicious!
 

Reviews
Hot and Cold!
Written by Betsie (30 comments posted) 14th April 2005
Very good - liked it. You need a question mark after grin.
Thanks Betsie
Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 15th April 2005
'tis done. 
 
You are becoming a reviewing champ! Well done. 
 
spidey
shlurp!
Written by ailbhe (6 comments posted) 26th April 2005
This is thoroughly yum. I like!
naughty but nice
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 3rd May 2005
how many calories! ;)  

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