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| The Rivers House hold | |
| By brook_rivers | ||||
| 28 April 2006 | ||||
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I did post this on the other village site but mite get some more reviews here!!! [Harry waltzes in with a smug look on his face] Brook: where have you been all night? [demands] Harry: What’s it to you? [sarcastically] B: well I hope you haven’t spent all your money (pause) you still owe me your share of the rent for this month. H: Don’t worry, my night out didn’t cost anything, that’s the beauty of it [chuckles]. [Brook looks slightly puzzled. Harry starts to go up the stairs] B: Where do you think you’re going? H: Bed B: I don’t think so, there’s tons of housework to do and this weeks food shop to get. H: It’s six in the morning! Are you mad! B: Well you can start nice & get everything sorted then you cant you! H: [Groans] you’re unbelievable! B: Right back at you! H: What’s the point in me doing the housework you’ll only moan I’ve done it all wrong! B: I’m busy. I do have a life you know! [Angrily] H: Really [sarcastically] B: [Snaps] yes, really, which is more than I can say for you…. Doing naff all everyday & sneaking around doing god knows what at night. [Harry advancing back up the stairs] H: Enough of the lecture mum B: [tearfully] that’s right Harry I’m not mum and I can’t be! Don’t you understand that? [Hysterically] I need you to help me out……… [Harry guiltily comes back down the stairs & hugs his sister] H: I’m sorry B: [between gulps and sniffles] I’m under too…. Much….. pressure….Harry… I just want…want you to be … more supportive [emotional moment as Harry and Brook reconcile]
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