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Glory Plague
By GilesLascelle
04 May 2006
The first time I have posted a poem here, and given the quality of some of the stuff I've read, I have to admit to a little trepidation.  Honest feedback still welcomed though.


In that garden

Where you told me

not to touch

I caught a little of your radiance,

Became contagious.

 

Now, I am not alone.

Countless luminous Typhoid Marys

Carry the virus, shining

to the undiscovered

edge of all things.

 

No-one immune

Nowhere beyond its reach,

An irresistible invasion

A glory plague gone global.

 

It mutates

Becomes pandemic,

Percolates through porous strata

Rock and skin

In a slow explosion.

 

Each particle of light

a spore

Unique in fragrance,

Infects with promise

Golden like summer

Fresh as tomorrow’s rain,

And love

for which there is no cure.

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Weel expressed
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 4th May 2006
I'm happy to give feedback but am not a poet so others may give you a more technical reveiw. 
I really liked the first 3 stanzas. I thought it was subtley expressed with poweful imagery. I couldn't follow it so clearly after,but I do sometimes struggle with poetic metaphors. Anyway a really powerul piece of writing, with some memorable phrases. Certainly deserves a place here 
 
"And love 
for which there is no cure".---reminds me of a song by Lenoerd Cohen one of my all time favourite so thanks for that too.I think I'll go and play it 
cheers  
BBS 
Lovely imagery
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 4th May 2006
But I'm not as bright as BBS so I couldn't follow "the story". On the umpteenth read the Penny dropped, I think. 
 
You=Mary if so all falls into place. 
 
An engaging read, 
 
Brian.

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