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Poetry
A wink, a chase...his face!!
By Psimple
05 May 2006
Based on a true story!


So the other day, as I drove by
A High school boy said me oh my
I quirked a brow and gave a wink
The chase was on, I'd need a drink.
Around the corner and down the street
I think it's time for us to meet.
There, up ahead, I spot the mall
I pulled in to a parking stall
He pulled in too as cool as ice
I nodded once and he winked twice.

His face was comical to see
When he beheld my pregnancy
Then from the backseat I withdrew
A toddler and a preschooler too
Methinks that he did jump the gun
But I was having so much fun
For but a moment and a chase
I was just another pretty face.

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Witty read
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3434 comments posted) 4th May 2006
I'm quite jealous, I can't remember when that last happened to me. A lad did offer me his seat on the train which isn't in the same league. Always happy to read a witty bit of poetry.The rhyming and scansion helped make it an easy read 
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