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Westward from Waverley : a musical journey
By patterjack
05 May 2006
Anyone who has done the seaside walk from Coogee Beach to Bondi Beach would pass along the eastern side of Waverley Cemetery, one of Sydney's oldest. The dead have such beautiful views for their eternal contemplation ! On sunny summer Sunday mornings a young musician would practise there. Now living here in the western suburbs of the city I listen to a young student also doing his best , but too often causing that Jolly Swagman from Waltzing Matilda to hurl himself once more into the billabong

The saxophonist in the cemetery sat entrenched
(not yet, perhaps as deep as in years to come )
back firm against a gravestone , his instrument's bell
raised to the heavens to which he might aspire.
His notes flew upwards , vortices of black,
to join the circling crows and the floating gulls
that swirled above the headland .
Below the cliff , the waves , with muted thunder ,
drummed against the sandstone ledges
endlessly proclaiming war against the land .

When I heard them thirty years ago
even then they seemed to signify
both the frailty and permanence of what is .

And now , far inland , a younger player ,
(summoned , I wonder , by the calls of morning crows ? )
attempts to master the intricacies of scales ,
and now and then , with frequent hesitation ,
some known and popular melodies .

Time has passed , and my own time grows short.
But the ambition to make music still remains
and someone or other will go on playing :
rival to Gabriel and his ultimate call.

Reviews

Written by Psimple (30 comments posted) 5th May 2006
I'm not familiar with all the many forms that poetry takes, but I really enjoyed this. 
 
I'm a big fan of both cemetaries and music, somehow the two seem to go hand in hand. 
 
loved the visual imagery. 
The saxaphone's "bell" echoing the bells that toll for all when our time comes. 
 
Also, to me, the control of the musician, to hold the fate of the note in his hand...while sitting in the one place where our lack of control is proven once and for all...wonderful! 
 
Having never been out o f the country of America...it's all I can do to finish my coffee and head out the door to work rather than jump on a plan and hop over the pond! 
 
Westward from Waverley
Written by Josie (2849 comments posted) 5th May 2006
I can well imagine the scene that you set because I have been in that white churchyard that looks out towards the sea, with the beautiful beach on the left hand side. I just thought about the numbers of people who had travelled the long travel to that far distant land and now lay looking out at the waves. They would certainly have had hard lives. Was the musician playing sadly?

Written by fellpony (1752 comments posted) 21st December 2007
I'm surprised so few people reviewed this back in 2006. I admire it very much, with its final line twist of viewpoint that still relates to all that has gone before. (I have to admit, I thought from the title that it might be related to, or by, Sir Walter Scott.)

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