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Fair Warrior
By brook_rivers
06 May 2006
A bit of a feminist piece!


Fair warrior hold up your shining sword and commence into battle
              
               Into the light, out of the shadows,

               Into the midst, out of the fog.

Fair warrior rise out of the deep, dark oppression that binds you,
Fair warrior your voice is your own, show him what you can do.

              Into the light, out of the shadows,
              Into the midst, out of the fog.

Fair warrior loosen your ties and break free from your miserable past,
Fair warrior embrace the longed for freedom and liberty at last.

              Into the light, out of the shadows,
              Into the midst, out of the fog.

Fair warrior proud and upright on your steed show him you can ride,
Fair warrior unleash your talents there is no longer a need to hide.

              Into the light, out of the shadows,
              Into the midst, out of the fog.

Fair warrior hold your head up high,
Look him directly in the eye,
And let him know that you can do more.

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Written by austheke (35 comments posted) 5th May 2007
repetitive.  
 
repitition is fine, as long as you don't overdo it. so perhaps here, you could work on that... 
 
well, i like it.

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