|
| READING ROOM | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|
|
| COMMUNITY | |||
|---|---|---|---|
|
| ABOUT GREAT WRITING | ||
|---|---|---|
|
| WORK AWAITING REVIEW |
|---|
|
| GW IS... |
|---|
|
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas
and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur
authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry
Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you
can make new friends and improve your creative writing. |
| WHO'S ONLINE |
|---|
| We have 1120 guests online and 3 members online |
| print friendly version | |
| The Eight O'Five Train | |
| By Ladybird | ||||||
| 08 May 2006 | ||||||
|
Written when I used to travel daily on the eight o 'five train to London. Just a bit of fun.(Or Rubbish - whatever your own thought are about it) See that man on the seat over there? He's the one with the knitted pullover. I saw him last week with a bowler hat on disguising his hair combed over. That girl with the specs on the end of her nose She sings to herself every morning. She's got wires in her ears Is sometimes in tears And often a dance she's performing. The kid with the bag who bashes your head Every time he walks through the train. He's nasty young git because I've seen him spit and I'm sure that he hasn't a brain! See the woman asleep? She snores like a drain And the man with the briefcase, just sniffs. The lady, with hat thinks, she is all that. And the man in the suit, he just whiffs! I travel each day On the eight 0'five train With the bunch of peculiar folk. As I - stare at them, they stare back at me SO, God knows What thoughts I provoke?
Only registered users can rate and write comments. Powered by AkoComment 2.0! |
||||||
|
|
Next item
|
|---|