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Poetry
Precious
By Ladybird
09 May 2006

Take from it what you want.



                                       

You are the light that keeps on burning
Though we know, you've travelled on.
You are our comfort in the winter
And our sweet, sweet summer song.
The memory of you lingers
When days get dark and cold.
You never really left us,
You never will grow old.

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done that
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3291 comments posted) 9th May 2006
I have done as you suggested and I've decided to keep it to myself, thanks for provoking that train of thought. 
It was a carefully written little picece allowing the reader to do just that.

Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 15th May 2006
beautiful moving poetry
:)
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 11th September 2006
beautiful work. :) keep it up. 
 
-rilLie
Precious
Written by Ladybird (32 comments posted) 11th September 2006
Thank you all for your kind comments - have not visited site for a while - suffering a rather serious illness, which I continue to battle. 
Kindest Regards -Ladybird

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