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Poetry
Lost in a moment
By JodhiDee
10 May 2006
The sun blanches the sky.
The heavens literally shine down,
and droplets sparkle bright in the water with ripples gentle and
slow.

The earth in all its glory is smiling,
a divine smile.

And for a moment time ceases to exisit
and happiness is our time.

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Written by Nance (86 comments posted) 12th May 2006
You've put here something gentle and kind I guess. I took delight while reading it. Indeed.

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