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By gutterkitty
11 May 2006
this was inspired by the mixture of a late evening walk home with my boyfriend and a Shins' song...slightly bizarre, but I like it a lot :)

It's funny that
you mention
                it
holding the moon
like metal
in my
        our
             hands.

If you would
kiss it, for luck
I could put
it in my pocket
and lose it
while we're walking.

Drop back
into the
           black
Shine
like
on lake
Blinking
in between
clouds.

It's funny
             that
                  you
mention
          it,
But
I don't
think that it
was
     mine,
to start with.

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Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 24th June 2006
Sweet 
RS :grin

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