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| Hiding In The Forest | |
| By shirley_keeldar | ||||||
| 13 May 2006 | ||||||
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This was good as a short piece of prose but I dont know if it works as a poem... It reminds me of Angela Carter's 'The Company of Wolves', not that I think Im that good, I'd just like to be! The forest crawls with dark hidden life No light except the green gloom, No sound but silent menace. Only those creatures akin To the dark thrive there. The wolf disguises himself as Something harmless; A log, a stone, but everything In the forest is threatening, Everything might harm. The wolf waits, silently observing, Stalking, creeping round you in circles. His mother had told him not to Play with his food but He left home as soon as he could. There is no hope in the forest. The wolf will hunt you and You will die. But- You want him to rip open Your chest; you tenderly Prise out your raw heart and Give it to him freely, a gift For him only. But- Your love fells him. He could be your firewood, Your heat, your sustenance but He doesnt know how and you No longer have the heart to show him. Like the trees that Litter the forest floor He lies fallen, infested; Rotten because you love him And because he cant love at all.
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