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Ode to the common Garden Snail
By Songster
15 April 2005
Sad but True

 

 

 

Creeping, at sunset, from your secret hiding place

seen only by the dark adapted eyes of passing cats,

sliding forth you leave behind a fairy trail,

a sliver of silver gleaming in moonlight.

Moving through rain washed shadows,

finding fragrant flowers planted for my pleasure

you consume them, casually, at your leisure.

 

Greedy gastropod, you deserve extermination!

Yet I discard my trowel and study you,

most successful growing thing in my garden.

Creeping, at sunset, to find your secret hiding place,

spying on your slow androgynous mating,

watching the birth of your horned offspring -

marvelling at their fragile, spiral shells -

perhaps, moist mollusc, I shall learn to love you,

most uncommon, common snail.

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studied and unusual
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 18th April 2005
admire your writing 
scans well and inspires a different take on most peoples perception so certainly does it's job

Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 18th April 2005
Thanks Kevin.
Greedy gastropod
Written by Josie (2533 comments posted) 6th June 2006
Ha Ha - I quite agree with everything you said, and are you the first person to write a poem to the snail? I am a gardener. I hate it when I have to put blue pellets down, and worse still when I see the victims the next morning. I have come to the conclusion that the best thing to do is to put in plants that I definitely know they do not like and leave it at that. I will always remember your well put phrase "greedy gastropod" - ha ha. Very good poem!

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